In this one, I removed most of the clutter. Now the explanations are in square brackets and below them are TL notes are in parentheses, in short:
Explanations = # in post & [#] at bottom
TL Notes = TL# in post & (TL#) at bottom
I appreciate the response this has gotten so far. I didn’t really expect it.
As I said before, I removed the clutter from this one, meaning moving all the notes to the bottom. I also reduced the number of the ones about the translation itself, since most of them don’t actually matter when it comes down to it.
Only one part left to this chapter now, which should be posting in about 30 minutes.